Tell me what you think about my progress so far

[rawr]

Hey guys i recently went to comikaze in LA and decided that was when I was going to start my RG ATOC build. At first I didnt know that there were different versions of RG so the one I made is a mix of ATOC and ROTJ . Tell me what you think about my RG so far. I know that the boots are ROTJ. I have ordered new gloves and boots. And i still need to make a belt. Also I would like to make a shout out to Mark Edwards of the Socal garrison for the pictures.




oh as a plus this is me with a Socal garrison AOTC RG



edit: I can see the pictures but here are the direct links if you can"t see
https://scontent-a.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos ... 4651_n.jpg
https://scontent-a.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos ... 6294_n.jpg
https://scontent-a.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos ... 4344_n.jpg
https://scontent-b.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos ... 4085_n.jpg

[Vlade]

I don't see any images or links in the post.

[rawr]

I don't see any images or links in the post.

I edited my first post to show the direct links

[stripes]

Just on initial inspection, your outer cloak isn't correct. You should not have overlaps from the back over both shoulders. There are several examples posted that show a proper outer cloak here on the boards.

If you have other pictures that detail other parts, we can see if there is anything else you'll need to rework prior to submitting for approval.

[Vlade]

If the front panel went over the sides that are wrapping around to the front, it would look accurate. Also it's hard to tell what the cloak is lined in, but it looks shiny, which is not in line with the CRL.

[rawr]

Just on initial inspection, your outer cloak isn't correct. You should not have overlaps from the back over both shoulders. There are several examples posted that show a proper outer cloak here on the boards.

If you have other pictures that detail other parts, we can see if there is anything else you'll need to rework prior to submitting for approval.

Thanks for taking a look. Yea I think it would be more on spec if I wore it backwards. I need to make a shoulder seam and have the overlap of the front over the back.

If the front panel went over the sides that are wrapping around to the front, it would look accurate. Also it's hard to tell what the cloak is lined in, but it looks shiny, which is not in line with the CRL.

The material is velvet. Its not shiny in person I guess the lighting was weird. It is a work in progress but I really appreciate your guys comments!