From what I can see with these photos, the inner robe belt is not going to pass inspection. It needs to be wider, and the middle piece should be made of the same fabric as the rest of the belt and inner robe, not a shiny ribbon.
Also, the arm slits need to be up by your armpits, not at you elbows.
Clearer pictures with natural lighting would definitely help with identifying any other possible problems.
Here are some cleaner pics of the inner robe and new sash. I remade the sash with a width of 5 inches.
I'll have some pics of the outer robes very soon, they're being hemmed as I type.
Full body
New Sash
TR 11107
Bast Alpha Garrison The Emperor's Thinking Guard
The seams still need work. They should be at your armpits for both the front and back. From what I can see, the seams are sitting 1-2" above your elbow in the front and below the elbow in the rear. Keep at it, as the inner robes are looking much better