Visor seems dark enough. Take a picture outside with natural light. Then i am able to tell you more.
Inner robe/lining material looks good too.
Cabbagefarmer still makes pikes but there can be a waiting time. Ask him.
How much material you should buy depends on the patterns you want to use.

They are too small. Should go to the top of the boots and more over the sides of the boots.

This is a really good built in my opinion.
Thanks for the pictures.

CRL are as strict as your gmo makes them strict.

you found the material you are looking for.

Looks fine to me.
Good job done.

A little shoulder padding will be fine.
After it you just have to make sure that the outer is hemed to be all around at the same height.
So it looks good.

Never tried to use E6000 to leather.
Better test it if it doesn't act agressive to the leather or the velcro on some spare parts.

It is for inner robe and lining and you can use gabardine for RotS.

CRL was changed to get a better understanding of the form of the robe.
But even before the change the slits are far too low. they should end under your armpit. And they should overlap so no slits will be seen when your arms are under the robe.