Looks good for the inner robe.

Those gloves and boots are good.

Helmet is more suitable for a TFU Guard as the shoulders are too smal.

Gloves are not acceptable for any guard.

Boots are not acceptable cause they have a heel.

Sorry.

Size and look are very good.
Maybe a little bit shorter.
You can go up with the slit a bit. Max 10cm i would say.

Nice build!

The shoulder could be TK as long as the lower part of the ridge fades into the bell.
So you can add the ridge on the upper part of a TB shoulder or make it Fade in with a TK shoulder.

I wll second Leigh with
These boots are not acceptable for RoTS. The black elastic rules them out as the boots need to be all red.

It must cover the shoulder straps of your chest and back armor.
So the sides may be too small but i can finally say its acceptable if i get pictures when your are wearing it with the armor on.

Beside choosing the wrong weapon for their 6inch guard there is alot of fantasy in this figure.
You are free to make this for fun but it is nothing acceptable for getting 501st membership.